Friday, 22 May 2020

Room 18s Autumn Poems

53 comments:

  1. Marcus you used so much good words
    by Jordan

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  2. Hi Marcus I like the
    adjectives you
    used in your poem
    I also like the colours
    you used By Jackson

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  3. What wonderful poems room 18! keep up the hard work and have fun!

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  4. lovely pictures everyone!Keep up the fantastic work
    love it!

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    1. thank you maddie you did wonderful work to what is your favorite autumn colour?

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  5. heaps of Autumn words good job! by Alistair

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  6. I like Theo's because i like the font. By Daniel

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  7. I like how lithara thought of lots of different colours

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  8. jackson i really like the creative sentences

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    1. Hi Theo Your one was great to
      I like the picture you added
      how many
      trees do you have in your back yard?

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  9. Hi Alex great poem
    do you like trees?
    Do you have any trees?
    hope you have a great day
    By Jackson

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    1. yes i have a hedge. The leaves do fall off so there deciduous 😃😁

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  10. a lot of interesting words Lithara keep your hard work!

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  11. Your Poem Is Very Detailed I Like The Part Where It Says:
    All The Deciduous Leaves Parachuting By: Lithara

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  12. i like all the poems because they have detail an i like the pictures they are beautiful and fantastic

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  13. Hi Alex i like the way you start with capital letter

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  14. cool poem alex i like it when you writ the leaves drifting down by lauchy

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  15. Hi lauchy love the part avalanches of leave keep up the good work

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  16. Hi max i like the way you said colorful leaves flying around and great green grass nice work max 😊
    By Ethan

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    1. how do you make the smiley face?

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  17. Maddie, I like the creative ideas you have in your Autumn poem. What are your favourite Autumn colours?

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    1. Red, yellow, lime-green, and orange. What are yours Michelle?

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  18. I love the pictures and the writing everyone fantastic work room 18!

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  19. Hi lauchy love the part avalanches of leave keep up the good work

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  20. which season is your favorite?:)

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  21. good job theo I like your writing

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  22. a lot of talking about leaves i like it

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  23. I Have A Question For The Class: What Do You Like About Autumn?.

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  24. I like everyone work because they added beautiful pictures of Autumn leaves

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  25. what is the coldest temperature in autumn Max
    from Jordan

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  26. Awesome work everyone(which colour leaves do you like)

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  27. Your Poem Is Very Expressive And Detailed Jackson

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  28. Well done daniel I like how you said leaves are falling down like parachutes what's your favourite autumn colour?

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  29. How many deciduous trees do you have Theo? By Daniel

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    1. Hi Daniel, i think i have 1 do you have any?

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  30. Hi Rachael, I like your autumn poem because it has lots of details and a beautiful background. Also is autumn your favourite season?

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  31. I Like The Part Where It Says: Everyone The Same But So Different Zoe It's So Unique

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  32. Hello Jayrett what colour leaves have you seen? Max

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  33. Max you have good colours.
    Do you have deciduous in front of your house or in your garden?

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  34. Rachael I like your writing which colour is your Favorite

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  35. I Have A Question For The Whole Class: What Do You Not Like About Autumn

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  36. 😀 thank's Max For the email

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  37. Anoji you have good colours and they are nice.
    Do you have gold colour leaves.


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  38. Hi Lauchy do you have a garden/backyard? if you have one,how many trees and colorful trees do you have? can you add it up?
    By Ethan

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  39. thank you mum by lauchy

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  40. Daisy your background is so pretty I like the sunset and the big trees in the background it is so like Autumn!!

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  41. It is an earthquake Aston! have you ever been in one?

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  42. The autumn pitchers are so cool!!

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